Darkness W.I.P.

Love the beginning of the second and third panels so far. Not much to say about them except maybe panel three is a little too linear; not very dynamic. Panel Two is great! The first panel is nicely rendered but looks a bit too open for a New York subway terminal. If it were just half that size I think it would be perfect. Longer and more narrow. As a side note, yet not really a critique of your art, 'cuz it's cool <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> though comic artists are very picky in regards to dramatic angles when judging. Try and think of it like Jerry Bruckheimer meets John Woo. Slightly over the top. lol

Very nice stuff... as usual. Hope this helps.